Amateur Photographer 18 years old, please comment on my work

Canonicity · 03-11-2010, 06:12 PM

My work is in my signature, please check out my other albums on my flickr though. Thanks guys

Optima

Touke Drift @ willow springs

HDR's

Portraits

jeveryday · 03-22-2010, 10:19 AM

Love the Optima pics... The SEMA pics look a bit standard

- Paul - · 03-22-2010, 11:38 AM

Are you after critique or work?

anthony @ eas · 03-22-2010, 02:37 PM

Good stuff

chinoxs203 · 03-22-2010, 04:16 PM

this car makes me smile
http://s775.photobucket.com/albums/y...t=IMG_0992.jpg

Mr Tonka · 03-22-2010, 07:43 PM

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Originally Posted by dark335i

how lazy are you. you want c&c but you can't post the pictures in this thread...and no i'm not lazy that i wont go to the link, i dont want to keep clicking on something then hitting back and then clicking the next one, etc.

Ditto

Valetin831 · 03-26-2010, 12:14 AM

NICE.

BillLee · 03-26-2010, 01:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dark335i

what a "member", he joins for some feedback but never comes back...

probably just wanted people to visit his flickr

Canonicity · 03-26-2010, 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dark335i

what a "member", he joins for some feedback but never comes back...

Lol, sorry guys... just been busy.

Thanks guys for the feedback. I just posted the sema pics cuz I thought you guys would appreciate pictures of the show. I would, however, like feedback on optima pics and other pictures from my flickr.

Canonicity · 04-06-2010, 04:11 PM

Ok guys, sorry about the delay. But posted some of my work in my original post. Hope you guys like them, but still after constructive criticism! Enjoy

Thanks,
Nathan

chinoxs203 · 04-06-2010, 04:14 PM

good shots.. what lens's?

Canonicity · 04-06-2010, 04:19 PM

I pretty much use the 28-135 kit lense the camera came with for all my pictures. I'm planning on getting a Canon 10-22 for better HDR shots and car show runs so I don't have to wait a half hour for the human traffic to clear up just to take a picture of a car.

mattburch · 04-23-2010, 12:51 AM

very nice man

Sylon · 04-23-2010, 03:57 AM

Great shots man, keep it up!

dcstep · 04-23-2010, 10:06 AM

Good shots, showing lots of potential.

Your HDRs look over saturated to me, but I like the compositions. Some of those might be better in B&W. I think the sunset (sunrise?) is the best of the HDR lot, mainly because it's hard to imagine what the "real" saturation point is in a sunrise/sunset. It works very well there.

Keep at it.

Dave

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Canonicity New Member 9 Rep 18 Posts Drives: n/a Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: California iTrader: (0)	Amateur Photographer 18 years old, please comment on my work My work is in my signature, please check out my other albums on my flickr though. Thanks guys Optima Touke Drift @ willow springs HDR's Portraits __________________ Amateur Photographer with a Canon 50D Want to see some of my pictures? [COLOR="DarkGreen"]Flickr Last edited by Canonicity; 04-06-2010 at 04:10 PM.. Reason: added pictures
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jeveryday Colonel 82 Rep 2,335 Posts Drives: 2012 535i xDrive Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Long Island, New York iTrader: (6)	Love the Optima pics... The SEMA pics look a bit standard
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anthony @ eas 324 Rep 3,635 Posts Drives: R56 Cooper S Join Date: May 2009 Location: 4015 E Leaverton Court, Anahiem, CA 92807 iTrader: (0)	Good stuff
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chinoxs203 Major 129 Rep 1,368 Posts Drives: 08 E92 335xi AW Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: CT iTrader: (7)	this car makes me smile http://s775.photobucket.com/albums/y...t=IMG_0992.jpg __________________ FOR SALE: Dropbox - please
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Valetin831 New Member 0 Rep 11 Posts Drives: AW 2007 335i Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Monterey, CA iTrader: (1)	NICE.
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Canonicity New Member 9 Rep 18 Posts Drives: n/a Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: California iTrader: (0)	Ok guys, sorry about the delay. But posted some of my work in my original post. Hope you guys like them, but still after constructive criticism! Enjoy Thanks, Nathan __________________ Amateur Photographer with a Canon 50D Want to see some of my pictures? [COLOR="DarkGreen"]Flickr
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Canonicity New Member 9 Rep 18 Posts Drives: n/a Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: California iTrader: (0)	I pretty much use the 28-135 kit lense the camera came with for all my pictures. I'm planning on getting a Canon 10-22 for better HDR shots and car show runs so I don't have to wait a half hour for the human traffic to clear up just to take a picture of a car. __________________ Amateur Photographer with a Canon 50D Want to see some of my pictures? [COLOR="DarkGreen"]Flickr
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Sylon Brigadier General 204 Rep 3,435 Posts Drives: 2011 135i, SG/CR, 6MT, M-Sport Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Michigan / Ohio iTrader: (0) Garage List 2011 135i [9.20]	Great shots man, keep it up!
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dcstep Major General 1299 Rep 7,389 Posts Drives: '09 Cpe Silverstone FR 6MT Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Colorado iTrader: (0) Garage List 2009 M3 [8.40]	Good shots, showing lots of potential. Your HDRs look over saturated to me, but I like the compositions. Some of those might be better in B&W. I think the sunset (sunrise?) is the best of the HDR lot, mainly because it's hard to imagine what the "real" saturation point is in a sunrise/sunset. It works very well there. Keep at it. Dave __________________ Flickr Photos Ucm, Inc.
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